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"The End of The Beginning" — a screenplay, excerpt 1


THE BUILDING - SIXTH FLOOR HALLWAY - DAY

Geoff gives the door a look before leaving.  But at the stairs, 
something makes him slow.  Halt.  Turn.  And lean against the 
wall, looking down the hall at apartment #66.  We hear a slight 
CHUCKLE as one... two... three LOCKS turn.  Geoff lights up.  

The door opens.  A HEAD peeks out.  A female head, hair wrapped 
in a towel.  Early 20s, short, pretty.  And surprised to see 
Geoff.

                     GEOFF
           Hi.

He moves off the wall and raises his hands to show his 
non-threatening intentions.

                     GEOFF
           Can I talk to you?

The woman surveys Geoff and the hallway so fast it's barely 
noticeable.  She makes a quick decision.  Nods.

Geoff stops at the door and notices the bathrobe she wears.  
He straightens up and stands tall for this short jewel.  He's 
about to speak but -- He seems unsure about something...

Meanwhile, in the splittest of seconds, she looks him up and 
down.  He smiles as he extends his hand.  She gives him one 
of hers, but with a start, jerks it back.

                     GEOFF
           Sorry.  It's cold.  Outside.

He waits for her to speak.  She doesn't.  So he does.

                     GEOFF
           Can I call you Lena?

                     LENA
           ... Yes.

                     GEOFF
           I'm sorry.  I see I got you out of the 
           shower.

She says nothing.  Okay...

                     GEOFF
           Like I said, my name is Geoff.  Wyman.  
           I left you a couple of messages?  Did 
           you get them?

She makes a gesture that could be a "Yes" or "No".

                     GEOFF
           They were about a friend of yours.  
           Annie Danilov.

Lena just stares at him.

                     GEOFF
           Do you know where she is?  Or how I 
           could reach her?

She makes no movement, no sound.  Geoff smells something inside 
and looks beyond her, catching just a slice of the apartment.  
He opens his mouth to speak but --

Lena pulls the door open and steps aside...



 
"The End of The Beginning" — a screenplay, excerpt 2


GEOFF'S APARTMENT - DAY

Geoff SLAMS down the phone.

                     GEOFF
           Stupid phone company!

He'd love to toss the phone out the window, but checks 
himself and puts it down.  We see there are "0" messages.

THE PHONE/ANSWERING MACHINE

now blinks with "6" messages.

WIDER - NIGHT

The apartment is dark.  A SCRAPING sound.  A LOCK turns.  
The door opens.  Geoff enters, drunk and in uniform.  He 
wobbles.  And drops out of sight.

GEOFF'S FACE - TIGHT PROFILE - MORNING

Asleep.  Bathed in bright light.  An ALARM on his cell phone 
goes off.  He blinks awake.  But something's wrong.

WIDER

His face, along with a little drool, lies on top of the 
mess on the floor.  He's cooked.  Wild hair, bleary eyes.  
He turns off the ALARM and rolls up.  

He looks around.  The joint's a disaster.  It's gotten so a 
path has been worn through all the stuff on the floor.  Even 
his bike is a mess.  Its handlebars are now clothing hangers.

                     GEOFF
           Crap...

On his way to the bathroom, he sees the answering machine.  
He hits play and shuffles away.  We hear the TINKLE of pee.

                     RUPERT'S VOICE
           I.

End of message.  Next message.

                     RUPERT'S VOICE
           Know.

Next.

                     RUPERT'S VOICE
           Where.

Next.

                     RUPERT'S VOICE
           You.

Next.

                     RUPERT'S VOICE
           Live.

The PEEING halts.  Next message.


                     RUPERT'S VOICE
           Geoffrey.

Geoff slowly exits the bathroom.  And just stands there.  
Immobile.  Staring at the phone...

            

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Sabu Quinn, screenwriter, director, producer of The End of The Beginning

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